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Stars
light up the sky
like fires
each one
a different flame
none are ever
the same
one day it
will burn out
and its light
will be gone
replaced
by a new one
far away
but still not the same
forever in the dark
alone, fogotten
but never erased
for it served
its purpose
and now must move on
like an old book
with its new cover
looks different
but on the inside
its the same
just like
a star
Poem #2. I wrote this during class a while back.
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Bohax Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the picture and the poem. It kind of gets to me :-) do you write songs? You should and then send them to me :-D
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iceprincess2016 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i wish i wrote songs, but if i tried i would probably suck
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Bohax Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it isn't very different to poems. What genre do you listen to?
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iceprincess2016 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
all kinds
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Bohax Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well if you would write a song, I would be happy to try to put music to it :-) try ot out :-D
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Jburns272 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great use of imagery :)
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:icondarkenconfusion:
I really like it!
awesome that you wrote that during class :)
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:iconifoto2mas:
Nice poem. Looking forward to seeing more of your art :)
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:iconcharfair:
your writing is great, id love to see more when their posted.
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