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Open Wounds
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Open Wounds
life is but an open wound
always pouring
forever drowining us
never slowing
people are foolish
to think that they can stop us
but they cant
each one of us is filled with flaws
good and bad
we are different
yet the same
no one can truely see
what we see
they will never understand
the pain
the suffering
the anguish
there might be others like us
but we are alone
life is but an open wound
always pouring
forever drowining us
never slowing
people are foolish
to think that they can stop us
but they cant
each one of us is filled with flaws
good and bad
we are different
yet the same
no one can truely see
what we see
they will never understand
the pain
the suffering
the anguish
there might be others like us
but we are alone
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This is my first entry. Please keep your comments nice. I love to write about how I feel and link it to everything about life.
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Really nice for your first entry! Well done.
I'm not trying to nitpick, but there's a little mistake in line 13, it's "truly", not "truely". I just wanted to point it out, not trying to insult or anything. Happens to me all the time.
I'm not trying to nitpick, but there's a little mistake in line 13, it's "truly", not "truely". I just wanted to point it out, not trying to insult or anything. Happens to me all the time.