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Open Wounds

life is but an open wound
always pouring
forever drowining us
never slowing
people are foolish
to think that they can stop us
but they cant
each one of us is filled with flaws
good and bad
we are different
yet the same
no one can truely see
what we see
they will never understand
the pain
the suffering
the anguish
there might be others like us
but we are alone
This is my first entry. Please keep your comments nice. I love to write about how I feel and link it to everything about life.
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80sSavage Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I can relate to this..... a little bit more than I want to relate to this but...... Great writing!
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Beastlygamer Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
same here
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GothicMixie197 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for uploading this..... i finally know how to express myself now. "tired".
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dizzybeyor Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reminding me.
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kiyoshi-seishin Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
that's true when my friends ask me "hey are you ok?" all i just say is "i'm fine, just tired.."
when i really feel just like this ; .. ; beautiful poem i really love the meaning.
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EatingEmoKids Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
:iconzoominplz: I just noticed how much I say "I'm just tired" as an excuse.
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Wolfiapaws Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm always tired.
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Mamc97 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
. . . you just put my life on paper . . .
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ShadowNightMist Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I can't begin to describe how much I can relate to this...
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Ilucia Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
you know, it's just a copy from similar pictures @ tumblr or other sides. that's nothing new, not even the "tired" thing. I saw many pictures that look almost the same...
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