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Open Wounds

life is but an open wound
always pouring
forever drowining us
never slowing
people are foolish
to think that they can stop us
but they cant
each one of us is filled with flaws
good and bad
we are different
yet the same
no one can truely see
what we see
they will never understand
the pain
the suffering
the anguish
there might be others like us
but we are alone
This is my first entry. Please keep your comments nice. I love to write about how I feel and link it to everything about life.
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:icon80ssavage:
80sSavage Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I can relate to this..... a little bit more than I want to relate to this but...... Great writing!
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Beastlygamer Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
same here
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GothicMixie197 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for uploading this..... i finally know how to express myself now. "tired".
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dizzybeyor Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reminding me.
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kiyoshi-seishin Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Traditional Artist
that's true when my friends ask me "hey are you ok?" all i just say is "i'm fine, just tired.."
when i really feel just like this ; .. ; beautiful poem i really love the meaning.
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EatingEmoKids Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
:iconzoominplz: I just noticed how much I say "I'm just tired" as an excuse.
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Wolfiapaws Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm always tired.
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Mamc97 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
. . . you just put my life on paper . . .
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ShadowNightMist Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
I can't begin to describe how much I can relate to this...
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Ilucia Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
you know, it's just a copy from similar pictures @ tumblr or other sides. that's nothing new, not even the "tired" thing. I saw many pictures that look almost the same...
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jay-willz Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
DONT BE A FUCKING JACKASS! who gives a rats ass she liked i liked others liked it get over yourself no one cares she is just expressing herself so fuck you k? k!
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Fixer444 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
All you need is a dose of self confidance and determination.

If life gives you lemons, squeeze them in his eyes, knee him in the balls and keep kicking while he's down.

At least that's how I think about things.
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kuramay Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
I wonder why we're all fed with the idea that we must keep our problems to ourselves and fake a smile. This seems like such a common thing people express through their art here, and it's always the front page, which means many feels the same.
Really, I think we're only as lonely as we make ourselves to be.
If everyone have problems, wouldn't it be great if people just share their problems with each other so they'll feel less alone about it?
I mean, when we were children, we all cried when we're sad. Then as we get older, we realize that others may not always have time for us, and we try to keep our problems to ourselves in order to not bother people. Then, after we get into the habit of keeping our problems to ourselves, we feel uncomfortable when other people are being "whiny", because we expect others to be as "considerate" as we are.
But really... sometimes we really need break that habit. It keeps society functional and stops people from melting into a puddle of sad whenever they feel bad for themselves, but ultimately it's not healthy.
I wish our society is constructed in a way which is more open, and people can feel free to share their thoughts and feelings with each other. '

Ah, sorry for the irrelevant rant on your comment, iceprincess2016.
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iceprincess2016 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not a problem
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andreii-s Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is.... beautiful <3 Yet sad...

Just forget what those other assholes are saying about how this is emo, which I see no reason why it should be seen like that...
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ZeldaVoorhees Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
IT. IS. SO. TRUE! :dance: You'll go far my friend B-)
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FuzzyBunnyAD Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Hah! I like the picture
And the poem's not half bad either
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DarknessGaVeMEWINGS6 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh I hear yea I love this.
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hirusen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was beautiful, sweetheart...And it makes me want to hug you!
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iceprincess2016 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank-you. That is kind of you. I just posted another poem called "River" and also read "Stars" if you want! [link]
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hirusen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*Goes to your page and reads them*

Wow...Those are pretty good! I have a little folder in my gallery called 'Thought Writes'...Or I think that's what it's called.

Anyway, you can look through those and see if there are any that you like!
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iceprincess2016 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
For those who don't like my poem, this was written for my friend's cousin who committed suicide. Not too long ago was her 1 year anniversary. I wrote this for her even though I didn't even know her. So shut up and don't comment if you don't have something nice to say or constructive criticism. Thank-you.
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Sazenami Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Im always tired... In both meanings.
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:iconfoxxyheartz:
Foxxyheartz Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Artist
Right by your side sister<3
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KopaLeo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Last words: I'm tired. I'm going back to bed.
Who: George Reeves
Note: Reeves committed suicide. This was the last thing he said to his friends before shooting himself in his bedroom.
This line is also referenced on S14E13 of South Park, when Mysterion killed himself for the last time.
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hetalia-rox Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so true
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StormCoyote Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this <3
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ShuraNight Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful and right to the point
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Wolfmoot Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Thanks for sharing :) :glomp:
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emoneko25 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Artist
I continue along on my path towards recovery but then I go through the forest of mixed feelings and there are monsters monsters that tear me apart from the inside out until I am no more than an empty shell without what used to be my soul.
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Jay-Hyena Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What if I'm actually just tired though.
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Susi-THzombie Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe you should check this or let a bta read it before you post it. Because although it's a nice poem, the mistakes really ruin it for me.
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
truly*
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DarkxNeo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my lord, this was beautiful.

And so true.
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Kuro--Neko--Chan Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful~! I wish more people could understand that and not just saying "emo" :/
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Romeeny Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this..
It's awesome<3
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ryro-fanfiction-x3 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm loving this ! That's always how i feel during my hoiday shopping... :v
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MaxwellStark Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
simply perfect :clap:
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Cryptic-Mess Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful first entry! Great work :clap:
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MoonLiteMagic45 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Artist
I love the acronym in the picture; it's very deep.
Wonderful work here! :)
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xXJet01Xx Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Story of my life>.<....
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:iconvinnie-the-dragon:
Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Maybe if you stopped crying and start cheering up and making friends, then you wouldn't have to cut your skinny little arms.
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xXJet01Xx Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Uhm ok well first I have a really good best friend which is good enough for me and I'm making more friends.I'm also cheering up alot more since I met my best friend so I'm good there.My arms may be skinnyXD but I assure you I'm not a Fucking emo dumb-ass that I have to cut my arms.I am being alot more cheerful that I used to,I may of had my bad times in the past but at least things are looking up a bit more for me...Stop getting into other peoples business without knowing what they've been through.
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Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Stop being out of the kitchen.
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xXJet01Xx Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
....Really?That's all you can come up with?God,you really are a pathetic excuse for a human,much more of a man,and pretty much a waste of life,I pity you,though I don't see the point to.I see that you aren't worth wasting my time or anybody else's at that matter,so if I were you I would'nt see a need to respond because your filth and you fuckin' know it.Now learn to go get a damn life and don't bother what I'm dong with mine and stop trying to fuck up everyone's lives just because yours was fucked up years ago.
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Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
tl;dr A cussing female... How depressing. Also, I'm alive. I have a life, then. Get back in the kitchen.
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xXJet01Xx Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yeah so?Your point?I can cuss if you like it or not,frankly I don't see how you can stop me so what's the point of bringing it up?And if your alive then it seems that people like you need to be killed because those times of life are over.Women can do whatever they wish and there's pretty much nothing anyone can do anymoreX)...and I HIGHLY doubt that you have a life...if you do it looks pretty damn sad to me and I'm sure other people will agree because your just bitching to a teenager about what she should do when you don't even know me.And I would say make me,but I really don't see how you canX)~.
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:iconvinnie-the-dragon:
Vinnie-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
No, you're overreacting. X)I'm alive. I have a life, logically. Get back in the kitchen.
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